Neutralika (neutralika) wrote in lyricistlounge,
Neutralika
neutralika
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PLEASE ADVISE -

I managed to remodel the ugliest parts of the cursing song (Swatting Flies) but there's still one line and I can't work it so I'm just asking you guys plus two lyrics communities.

In the line

"Don't fucking ask if this is okay"

I need to replace "fucking" with something less inappropriate but equally blood-spitting and hopefully the same number of syllables, with the emphasis on the first beat. Actually, screw blood-spitting, just make it fit. Thanks.

x-posted neutralika and lyricists_guild.
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