Italian Angel (theitalianangel) wrote in lyricistlounge,
Italian Angel
theitalianangel
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Since I'm new here, I thought I'd post a couple of songs I wrote recently. Anyway, I wrote these two songs over MLK weekend. Feel free to tell me what you think. Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.


Everyday is different and new
Everything seems to be going well
Until suddenly you come face to face
With a demon
And your world starts to fall apart.

CHORUS
Whenever you feel down and alone,
Just know that I'll be there for you.
Don't lose faith or hope.
Just hold on.

People may say that you're weird and dumb
And try to bring you down
Don't worry about them
Don't let them bring you down.

CHORUS
Whenever you feel down and alone,
Just know that I'll be there for you.
Don't lose faith or hope.
Just hold on.

Feeling empty will only keep bring you down.
Don't lose hope.
Just follow your dreams.

CHORUS
Whenever you feel down and alone,
Just know that I'll be there for you.
Don't lose faith or hope.
Just hold on.



I feel empty inside
And I hear nothing but the wind
From the storm

Being without you,
I feel alone.
Seeing you with her
Makes me feel empty inside.

I tell myself that I can move on,
But I know I can't because I still love you.
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